tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5852583071241460496.post3941670776907713724..comments2024-03-04T01:23:18.109-05:00Comments on Tangled Up In Words: Sample CritTangled Up Girlshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01472367693641187926noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5852583071241460496.post-8775031196113140122012-02-04T21:39:25.807-05:002012-02-04T21:39:25.807-05:00I think this crit is great because it helps not on...I think this crit is great because it helps not only the original author but anyone who struggles with where & how to open their story. <br /><br />Also, the adverbs thing? That used to be until someone pointed it out to me. I didn't even realize I was doing it. <br /><br />I think this snippet of writing is great and will be even more so with just a bit of tweaking. Kudos to the author!Christinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022815349809140110noreply@blogger.com