Showing posts with label Conversation with a Crit Partner. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Conversation with a Crit Partner. Show all posts

Friday, May 11, 2012

Convo with a CP: Brainstorming

Brainstorming is an important aspect to every story. You need to have other ideas and solutions to conflicts, etc. Some of these things are big (like figuring out character motivation) and some are small. You don't always have to work with someone else, but I've found that we all tend to work better when we brainstorm together. Here's one example...

Cindy:  SO
I had an idea for the shop beside my MC's
it's a coffee shop
 me:  okay
 Cindy:  and I was all excited
thinking the shop would be called "The Other Black Bean"
 me:  hahahhahhaah
 Cindy:  With the Other being all swirly and the O being the top of the coffee mugh
BUT
coffee beans are brown
LOL
 me:  lmao
thats hilarious
 Cindy:  Yeah
I'm laughing too
I was all excited
and yeah
 me:  hahah
 Cindy:  fail
 me:  call it
The Other Beanstalk
or The Beanstlak
or Joe and the Beanstalk
hahaahahahah
 Cindy:  LMAOOOOOOOOOOO
 me:  they DO grow on a stalk
lol
 Cindy:  I'm laughing SOOOO hard right now
 me:  lol
hahahahhah
 Cindy:  into a corne, ehe?
 me:  yup
r
im stuck
Cindy:  Husband is looking at me like i'm nuts
 me:  hahaaahahha
lo
hahah
nuts and beans
Cindy:  I like Joe and the Beanstalk actually
 me:  they are half hardware store, half coffee shop
hahaha
Cindy:  LMAOOOOOOOOo
me:  lol
Cindy:  Beanstalk Joes
Joe's Beanstalk
me:  hahah
the latter
Cindy:  yeah
okay
Joe's Beanstalk
hahaha
 me:  Joe's MAGIC Beanstalk
Cindy:  LMAOOOOOOOOO
totally using that
omg
that's hilarious
BEST NAME EVER

Friday, May 4, 2012

Conversation with a Crit Partner

As you all know, critique partners are sorta awesome. Me and mine (which are these lovely girls here!) all approach things differently. Since my post on Tuesday proclaiming my writing transition blues, Cindy so happily volunteered to have writing dates with me. So now, every Monday and Thursday night she's forcing me to write words with her for an hour. No matter what. No excuses. Isn't she great?

Last night, I was brainstorming with her in a pre-writing session. My big issue with this story is that it's so simple I make it complicated. And it's so complicated that I get lost in it. Of course, all this is in my head! In reality it's not so bad. (At least, that's what we keep telling ourselves! I think Christina will disagree once we go at this MS with shearing scissors.)

Anyway, this is what happens when we brainstorm. At least sometimes.... *ahemALWAYSahem*


 Cindy:  hahaha
what was your idea?
you said you had an idea for what to write next?
are you going to go with it?
 me:  just an idea. idk
 Cindy:  stop thinking about the sub plots
and write the idea
 me:  hhahahaha
im not. now im talking to X. lol

Cindy:  I command you!

 me:  bahahahha

 Cindy:  Did that work?
oh

 me:  no

 Cindy:  lol
 me:  hahahahaha
 Cindy:  I just emailed her
 me:  hahha
 Cindy:  COMMAND DAMNIT
 me:  emailed about what?
:P
 Cindy:  shakes wand
 me:  stuffs fingers in ears
dances
 Cindy:  to apologize for not getting her MS back to her yet
abracadabra
me:  i think she's got a whole revision now
you should check before you start that
expecto patronum
 Cindy:  damn you!
and your Harry Potter knowledge
I must re-read those books
lol
 me:  heheheheh
luminos
we must say that
anytime we get a bright idea
get it?
luminos
 Cindy:  I do!
LUMINOS
ahhaa
 me:  im punny.



Life changing stuff right? AH. As a side note, we did actually write words....it was just later.